HAIKUS.....

Subject: HAIKUS..... Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:08 am

HEY HEY JUST THOUGHT ID GET THIS STARTED... THIS POST IS FOR ALL THE HAIKUS OUT THERE..

IN CASE YOU DONT KNOW WHAT A HAIKU IT.. ITS A SHORT POEM.. IN A SPECIFIC STYLE. THERE ARE ALOT OF DIFFERENT FORMS OF HAIKU.. I CALL THE STYLE I USE AS FREEFORM.. IT ONLY FOLLOWS SYLLABLE COUNT
1ST LINE MUST HAVE 5 SYLLABLES
2ND LINE MUST HAVE 7 SYLL.
3RD LINE MUST HAVE 5 SYLL.

HERE IS THE FIRST ON FOR THE BOARDS.. AND AN EXAMPLE..

FREEFALLING LIFE FORCE
ANSWERS IN ANGER FOR THE
TEARS THE SKY HAS CRIED

JUST THOUGHT ID GIVE CREDIT TO STAR.. SHE GAVE ME THE IDEA FOR THE HAIKU .. AND PROMPTED ME TO MAKE A POST... HURRAY STAR

Subject: Re: HAIKUS..... Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:58 am

thought id be the first to add on im not so good with haikus hope this is alright

A life-time has passed
theres hope for the wakeing sun
the tears cried washed away

Subject: Re: HAIKUS..... Mon Apr 06, 2009 1:01 am

School tomorow night
And I have to work all day
Star is not happy

Smile

thought I'd lighten the mood

Subject: Re: HAIKUS..... Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:08 pm

HEY HEY THIS HAIKU WAS INSPIRED BY AN EARLY MORNING CONVERSATION WITH DRACOS....AS WELL AS COWRITTEN BY HIM.. HERE IT GOES

LET TIME SLIP AWAY
LIVE FOR ETERNAL MOMENTS
LISTEN TO THE RAIN

Subject: Re: HAIKUS..... Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:15 pm

I still say that you should take all of the credit for this.......And you should listen to me on this. I'm usuing my 100th post to tell you...

Oh well....

*chases a ball*
bounce

Subject: Re: HAIKUS..... Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:20 pm

*CHUCKS BALL INTO MUD PUDDLE*....... AND WHY IS IT I SHOULD TAKE THE CREDIT ON THIS?..... HALF OF THE HAIKU..YOUR EXACT WORDS

Subject: Re: HAIKUS..... Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:26 pm

"caues I didn't reconize it to be a piece of art and all! That's why you should be the one to take the credit.

*cannon balls into the puddle, splashing TBT*

bounce